Monday, July 27, 2015

Chapter 2...The Story of the Diamond Necklace

Her hair was fried ! She couldn't believe it! Her hair was ruined ! She then rembered the night before she was trying so many hairstyles that the product and heat was causing her hair to break and fall off. Oh no!  She panicked ....her hope wasnt all lost. In her mind she was thinking it's only my hair , then her shoes were steaming! They are a complete disaster. They seemed to that thy had gotten wet (She is an electronic expert so she made shoes using technolgy). As she explained the events to her best friend on the phone , she tried to make her feel better but, everything was going down hill. She ran to check her dress and it was in pieces! What a nightmare she had steamed her perfect dress, she embraced her dress and threw it down to the floor. Desperate her mind searched to look for a soution.... It was the morning of prom and her hair was fried, her shoes were destroyed , and worst of all her dress was ruined! 
"Don't worry Maddie we will figure something out..I have to go, see you later" ,her bestfriend assures her, as she puts a hat on to cover her hair.


She walks downstairs in pity, to see her dad cooking breakfeast in the kitchen. "Hello darling ! Good morning" 
"Hi, dad" , she says with a low voice.
"Ready for the big day?" 
"No dad , you wont believe what happened?! Everything is ruined. My dress, my shoes , and my hair ! (She removes her hat)
"Woah", dad laughs..........
"I can call in and go to help you find a beautiful dress and fix that hair" , dad says to her in a loving way.
Maddie smiles. "No dad its ok i can figure it out and besides you cant call in dad! You work in the emergancy room. People are counting on you. And its your big day! " 
Dad chuckles.
"So have you made your descsion yet?" Dad asks.
"No dad i still have time to think about it..." 
"There's nothing to think of ? You got accepted into MIT , this is ..." 
"I know , I know dad ...A one time oppurtuinity.", she mocks in a desturb way. 
"Bye , im going to be late ", dad says as he kisses her good bye. 
"Bye dad, I love you " Maddies says with a smile. 

Rinnnnng...rinnnnng....It was Kyle... "Hey.." 
"Hey baby, so today I'm in the shelter with the animals so I won't be able to get you today." 
"Awh , ok your so amazing" , Maddie says in awe.
.....hangs up
"He's so perfect.." She replies to herself.

Well ... Looks like im stuck here... with no car ..what am I going to do?? ..Maddie ponders....How am I going to get everything fixes for today?.....(sighs)
She just sits there in the kitchen looking at herself . It was suppose to be the best day of her life but it was just seeming to get worst and worst. 

Riiiing..ring..ring...
The door bell? 
"Who could it be?" Maddie says to herself.
Ring , ring , ring , ring...
"Im coming ! Hold up." 

(To be contuined )

Who could be at the door?

Ps. Hope your enjoying the story! Share and comment what you think or what you are understanding :) Come back tomorrow for the next part. This series is not just a story it has a a special message in every chapter. What i loved the most about this chapter is the way her dad approched the situation and the relationship between them. Maddies reaction showed the loving and care of a daughter. That shows the auttitude of a woman. She is caring and loving and always makes the environment more warming.(: 
-Be blessed darlings, Natalie (:

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